This freebie is actiually quite readable. Don't get me wrong, it is in dire need of a great editor, but there is a lot of potential.
Steve and Sarah Miller are characters you can relate to. When Steve inherits a house, some interesting things happen to them. All of a sudden they are in another world, one populated by Griffins, and Dragons, and where all people have some magic abilities. Armed only with their clothes and the contents of Sarah's purse, they have to navigate the strange world they are in and try to find their way home. Dressed in their strange clothes (they could probably use something like kerrits equestrian apparel) and withe their strange accents, the people of Lentari don't quite know what to make of the strangers.
I like the relationship between the two main characters. They are just plain sweet, regular people. The conflict in the story comes from their situation, but their love for each other remains a strong thread through the story. I think it was great of author Jeffrey M. Poole to write a fantasy story with "everyman and everywoman" as the protangonists. Where most married couples would snipe and snark at each other when presented with difficulties, Steve and Sarah try their best to be strong for each other. Nice role models.